This story seems like it going to be good but it needs to be more information about the main character and how he/she will be. but the overall ideas need to be long enough to make the readers enjoy it. and it's need to take it's time and don't give up on it because if you ran out of ideas because the readers can help you out with the story if you need it. And lastly good luck.
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