Review Detail of Nihil_Est_Scriptor in Mafia King’s Teacher

The writing is really good. There are some small grammatical mistakes here and there. other than the book is well written. The book currently has only 12 chapters. So I don't think I can comment on the stability of updates. The story development is well written. It is interesting and has a good pace. The character design is also good. I can see more about a character's personality in every chapter. Each of them have their own characteristics and personalities and that makes them unique and more life like. Which makes the book more entertaining. I think the author needs to work more on the world background. Maybe talk more about the surrounding and all. It does not personally bother me too much, but seeing descriptions can help the readers envision the areas where the scene is taking place. These are just my personal opinions. Anyway, this book is definitely a good read. Good work author!