Review Detail of SOMMO_ARCANO in The Counselor - A Group Chat Story

the idea of ​​the story is good but the brain supplement is too much, the author adds what he wants and gives the phoenix a lot of negative things, even the psychologist's story is a bit worthless (it doesn't work like that), then chat connection multiverse? the marvel multiverse already has infinite multiverses containing infinite multiverses of infinite scale and of all kinds, there is also the dc which is similar to marvel in the size of the cosmology, DxD is even worse because they are inside an alpha reality, practically we are already 3 omniverses ! marvel and dc have mini omniverses within the big omniverse, basically the author connects chat to various omniverses across the whole but it is only referred to as a multiverse. the author does not know what to write and the brain supplement is huge, the story has few and almost no frequent updates, even the character of jean is completely different from the original, the background of the story is explained little and talks about how mc has problems with his life (seems to be a reflection of the author), the various characters are amazed by various things in short, the cerebral integrator is very large (it seems that the author talks nonsense or rather the author talks nonsense) the development over from being a psychologist is null and does not change his daily life or give him bonuses, there is no love story or anything else, even the author throws away all the things that could happen or happen in other parallel universes and jean behaves like if he had, the story seems strange both reading it and trying to imagine it and there are various parts that seem only to vent the author in short, no historical development, there is no harem or love story (if you see jean and rias Gremory in the chat you always get some ideas but the author immediately takes away the possibility), the background of the world seems semi-unknown, slow or non-existent update, too much brain supplement in short there are many problems