Review Detail of DreamCrusher101 in My Second Life in Another World

The romance is certainly not triple A quality but it's still better than 8/10 novels on here where romance is concerned tbh, easily beats 9/10 where harem novels are concerned too. Rating 1 star just on the romance is pretty low when it's not the entire premise of the novel either but w.e at least there's a reason given for it. xD

ouch that hurts but you are right bout me not having any experience in it but I am trying to improve the writing on that but it is hard to find good romance novels these days. ... .. .

Just ignore this guy, he is only spamming 1star reviews with only nonsense

the rating maybe harsh, but he's not wrong. the romance needs work. it's like 2 Pokémon mating, not a human

yah

Yeah its pretty bad… Like why are they blushing so much and stuttering all the time I get the occasional one but it’s actually every other sentence of interaction between mc and heroines

it's not nonsense bro the harem and romence destroyed the story i droped when the mc starrted to flirt with like 3 girl at the same time bruuh rally to scumy

so the romance aspect was the only one you didnt like?

yeah, overall the novel is good but the romance made me drop the novel

a shame indeed I tried to salvage it give it a go if you feel like it.

Aku setuju denganmu.

There is no one good approach to romance. blushing and stutters are normal considering the extraordinary face of the mc. I like the romance here, it's a small harem which is also great as the interactions are much more satisfying than a pokemon harem where you interact only one or two times with each girl. I hope you develop their relations and make them more in-depth to know how they feel. The complainants here are either fed up with normal cliches or they've been fed too much stereotypical fanfic pokemon harems. Even if you don't agree with how the romance is being developed, you can still enjoy it.

I am still trying to develop them properly by some interactions between them.

Keep up the good work. You can refer to romance genre novels for the romance. There could be some good ideas there. Or just go with your own ideas as I said there is no one way to have romance either in a story or irl

Relationship does not equate to love*

i think as long as the Author is making an effort to improve then its fine with me, after all this is a FF not a professional Novel.

And that's the way, everyone exchanging tips and with very well done reviews

that was good. Like two Pokémon mating.

You reworked it? haven't tried the fanfic yet, I just wanted to know if you removed the "blushing stuttering every paragraph" the other guy just told before reading

I am saying it got better overtime as wrote more chapters,