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AuthorSven
AuthorSvenLv11yrAuthorSven

I don't know I said this novel is pretty good. But for me it was pretty bland there was no emotion just saying like example: 'He said, He got fear, and many more' there was no emotion of the character it was like author just saying it and making it like a emotional of the character and the world background is quite bad for me the author didn't explain the background where he,they go it was like saying he goes into wood and there was no explaination about how big ya know... I just read this novel and just click and go next chapter because it was pretty bland idk how did this story got high review but for me it was pretty bland as if you want drink coffee instead sugar you put salt or none. and the character design is quite good... and story development is quite bad because veldora saying he was trapped in cave that sealed for 130 years? idk so that and what trigger me most is that other characters is still alive when rimuru is reincarnated when veldora is trapped in cave for 300 years and the story is quite forced because they already met demon lord even though they didn't make big problem so that.

Harbingers of Change

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AuthorSven
AuthorSvenLv1AuthorSven

well exactly maybe author didn't search about other side character and just watch and think how the story went and that.. ya know and it was hard to focus other side character though so maybe the author didn't focus and just focus on mc

PetrickSetar:well I think this novel not really focusing on minor character from tensura. It basically Ains Oal Gown take over this world based on Momonga character he doesn't need to "play" much with small character like that. He already have many OP and loyal followers under his command. Yes it's about kingdom building story, but not literally from a scratch it's like how powerful country back in WW1 colonized weak country back then.
AuthorSven
AuthorSvenLv1AuthorSven

oh and how did gobta group and the ranga group alive too so that explain it.

PetrickSetar
PetrickSetarLv13PetrickSetar

well I think this novel not really focusing on minor character from tensura. It basically Ains Oal Gown take over this world based on Momonga character he doesn't need to "play" much with small character like that. He already have many OP and loyal followers under his command. Yes it's about kingdom building story, but not literally from a scratch it's like how powerful country back in WW1 colonized weak country back then.

AuthorSven:oh and how did gobta group and the ranga group alive too so that explain it.