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Ok so, the chemistry is hot, I have no idea how they were just roommates, ahem. The writing quality is really good, the only thing I find a bit of problem with is how fast the story is going, I don't know maybe there should be a little more character development, it's probably because it's only a few chapters as of now but yes, I would like to know what the characters are like much more personally except that, this book is worth reading, into my library you go!

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Chaitzzz
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ur wlcm, all the best!

hidingpanduh:Ahh thank you! Yes I do agree I need to work on character development for sure. Since it's my first WPC entry i tried to write 5000+ words as quickly as possible to meet the deadline so didn't edit much yet. Thank you for this helpful input, I will keep it in mind :)
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Ahh thank you! Yes I do agree I need to work on character development for sure. Since it's my first WPC entry i tried to write 5000+ words as quickly as possible to meet the deadline so didn't edit much yet. Thank you for this helpful input, I will keep it in mind :)