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Review Detail of Ehtimam in The Innkeeper

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Ehtimam
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Well for starters if you create a story about cultivation fantasy you do need to cultivate the Main Character instead of leaving him for at low level without making him cultivate and become stronger for most of the first 150 ish chapter. That's ridiculous and not necessary. You may call it character development to fancy a little bit but that is not character development but sloppy writing. What is the point of that organised tournament so early in the series?? It would've been so much fun if the MC is powerful but instead you just provide him with unnecessary materials that make him look weak.

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