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Elder
ElderLv111yrElder

Forced plot with cultivators and his family. Forced quest. (That can kill you if failed and stupid at the time) Just killed this story for me.

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The Innkeeper

lifesketcher

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The_archer1202
The_archer1202Lv15The_archer1202

the family is indeed cliche(though they barely get mentioned after a while) but there is only like 2 quests that mention a threat of death that both have a secondary lose condition that he easily meets making the death part irrrelevant

C_K_3132
C_K_3132Lv13C_K_3132

In books, are plots not always forced? They did not sit down and write themselves...

Dreyerboys
DreyerboysLv15Dreyerboys

No, they aren't forced. A good plot should feel natural. It should feel like "under the parameters that have been set, this outcome is very possible or within expectations."

C_K_3132:In books, are plots not always forced? They did not sit down and write themselves...