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alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv52yralivegolden1

Mc just sucks, he’s supposed to be smart but keeps on making major mistakes. I feel like the plot is forced and what’s up with cultivators and knowing he has an inn. Does he really not take the systems warning seriously.. I hope he don’t let the people he knows stay in the inn for free because that’s just being an idiot, what if they get killed by strong people.

The Innkeeper

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alivegolden1
alivegolden1Lv5alivegolden1

Also most of the chapters aren’t even about the inn. If your going to make a novel with a shop or business why would you want to write about other useless things other than the plot we came for. like did the author just forgot about it and just want to use that as an excuse to get abilities. If that’s the case than just do normal system

OOFMARTIALARTIST
OOFMARTIALARTISTLv2OOFMARTIALARTIST

Then the story would be boring and bland, but you do have a point with the major stupid mistakes the mc makes, which could have been written out better. By the way, if the story you want is all about the inn then what's the point of the mc? All you would get if the story was focused on the inn is either a very lowkey or nonexistent mc.

alivegolden1:Also most of the chapters aren’t even about the inn. If your going to make a novel with a shop or business why would you want to write about other useless things other than the plot we came for. like did the author just forgot about it and just want to use that as an excuse to get abilities. If that’s the case than just do normal system
Dolor_Chismis
Dolor_ChismisLv1Dolor_Chismis

the mc is not a idiot brother, the AUTHOR is for making a story and plot like this 😂😂

No_Reading_No_Life
No_Reading_No_LifeLv15No_Reading_No_Life

that is just such a mean thing to say 😢

Dolor_Chismis:the mc is not a idiot brother, the AUTHOR is for making a story and plot like this 😂😂