Review Detail of Fragasile in Mountain God Needs No Donations Only Worship Please.

What a sorry excuse of a fanfic this is. Unnecessarily long paragraphs and dialogue, punctuation and grammar being all over the place, internet terms being thrown around that ruins immersion, the “comedy” being the most unamusing excuse for horrible writing, horrendous characterization of the characters you used from other works, as well as your lack of knowledge of how strong anyone is, especially the capabilities of a mountain god. This was already such an unreadable mess of a fanfic, but the crossovers made it even worse. I suggest you to first start with something small and having proper knowledge of it than whatever the hell this trasheap Frankenstein of a fanfic is.