Review Detail of Nicolas_Bahamondes in My First Wives
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It is the story of a beginner. Romance has no logic, it is absurd. The protagonist is the dog of a system and has no will of his own, he doesn't do anything worthwhile.
My First Wives
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Finally. It's someone gave me a critique. Thanks to this, I can now tell why I feel something is missing whenever I write. Though, I will never promise my writing will improve. But seriously, these ideas never come into my mind whenever I write despite knowing these. At least, my dementia hasn't affected me as a person.
Finally. It's someone gave me a critique. Thanks to this, I can now tell why I feel something is missing whenever I write. Though, I will never promise my writing will improve. But seriously, these ideas never come into my mind whenever I write despite knowing these. At least, my dementia hasn't affected me as a person.
Finally. It's someone gave me a critique. Thanks to this, I can now tell why I feel something is missing whenever I write. Though, I will never promise my writing will improve. But seriously, these ideas never come into my mind whenever I write despite knowing these. At least, my dementia hasn't affected me as a person.
As a reference I tell you to watch Annihilation Maker DXD, there is an overpowered protagonist who works for a god, even so the story is good mainly because of the interactions between the characters.
I77OI3:Finally. It's someone gave me a critique. Thanks to this, I can now tell why I feel something is missing whenever I write. Though, I will never promise my writing will improve. But seriously, these ideas never come into my mind whenever I write despite knowing these. At least, my dementia hasn't affected me as a person.