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like everyone else is repeatedly telling the arthur you have the biggest plot whole right at the star and you didnt even change it the only thing u changed was his weapon and the fight scene is still unrealitic
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antmanFN:ok here me out it is your story and you can make as many plot holes as you want but no matter what you say the truth is the story is bad and isn't entertaining
whats the plot read every single other review it tells you she wouldnt lock him up thats dumb asf you calling my comments dumb by your novel is trash you didnt even rewrite anything you put the same thing out how about you listen to what everyones telling you and maybe it'll stop being trash
JokerHighJack:What’s the plot hole
Why wouldn’t she lock him up. Maybe she would do that. A lot of people also say how good it is. Already have 900 saves in a day so I think it’s going pretty well the dumbest people are just the loudest sometimes
antmanFN:whats the plot read every single other review it tells you she wouldnt lock him up thats dumb asf you calling my comments dumb by your novel is trash you didnt even rewrite anything you put the same thing out how about you listen to what everyones telling you and maybe it'll stop being trash
every single one of you reviews is below 3 stars because people add you it to the library means nothing your comments and reviews do why would she lock up her son for 5000 years when she said she's only locking him up to convince the amazons but she didn't even try it literally said they all forgot about him when nyx offers to take him she says no because she loves him and doesn't want to separate from him but she literally never visits him again she said she cant kill him because his zeus son and he might get bad bout how is torturing him any better it would've made since if zeus demanded his son from them rather then let him go throught that as zeus cares for diana so of course he would love his son and even above all that like every constantly tells you she couldve took him to a random orphanage and left him there and above all that the fight scenes are cringe asf he really said timeout like who does that and the wishes were trash too see i can go on and on about had bad it is if i can name 1000 bad things and only 1 good thing then that should tell you something and iv'e only read 5 chapters
JokerHighJack:Why wouldn’t she lock him up. Maybe she would do that. A lot of people also say how good it is. Already have 900 saves in a day so I think it’s going pretty well the dumbest people are just the loudest sometimes
antmanFN:every single one of you reviews is below 3 stars because people add you it to the library means nothing your comments and reviews do why would she lock up her son for 5000 years when she said she's only locking him up to convince the amazons but she didn't even try it literally said they all forgot about him when nyx offers to take him she says no because she loves him and doesn't want to separate from him but she literally never visits him again she said she cant kill him because his zeus son and he might get bad bout how is torturing him any better it would've made since if zeus demanded his son from them rather then let him go throught that as zeus cares for diana so of course he would love his son and even above all that like every constantly tells you she couldve took him to a random orphanage and left him there and above all that the fight scenes are cringe asf he really said timeout like who does that and the wishes were trash too see i can go on and on about had bad it is if i can name 1000 bad things and only 1 good thing then that should tell you something and iv'e only read 5 chapters
ok here me out it is your story and you can make as many plot holes as you want but no matter what you say the truth is the story is bad and isn't entertaining
JokerHighJack:Or here me out it’s just my story and you are wrong
it is a plot hole cause it dosent make any sense why someone that old and smart would do something so stupid for no reason and she didnt even visit him when he was trapped so the reason for her doing it in the first place doesn't make sense
JokerHighJack:It’s not a plot hole if that’s how her character is though
antmanFN:it is a plot hole cause it dosent make any sense why someone that old and smart would do something so stupid for no reason and she didnt even visit him when he was trapped so the reason for her doing it in the first place doesn't make sense
antmanFN:it is a plot hole cause it dosent make any sense why someone that old and smart would do something so stupid for no reason and she didnt even visit him when he was trapped so the reason for her doing it in the first place doesn't make sense
First of all i do not think zeus would care about his children, as shown in multiple myths and adding the fact he is immortal, he did not watch over diana did not meet her once in those 5000 years. correct me if im wrong but the amazon island in the comics and movieis an island forbidden for men, the amazons were not able to leave their island, reason being the amazons were a secluded race. And in that 5000 years of being imprisoned where would a NORMAL person find the reason to be angry for that long, are you so dumb that you forgot the fact that 5k years does not equal 5 seconds? At that point either we would have insane mc or outright vegetable mc,
antmanFN:every single one of you reviews is below 3 stars because people add you it to the library means nothing your comments and reviews do why would she lock up her son for 5000 years when she said she's only locking him up to convince the amazons but she didn't even try it literally said they all forgot about him when nyx offers to take him she says no because she loves him and doesn't want to separate from him but she literally never visits him again she said she cant kill him because his zeus son and he might get bad bout how is torturing him any better it would've made since if zeus demanded his son from them rather then let him go throught that as zeus cares for diana so of course he would love his son and even above all that like every constantly tells you she couldve took him to a random orphanage and left him there and above all that the fight scenes are cringe asf he really said timeout like who does that and the wishes were trash too see i can go on and on about had bad it is if i can name 1000 bad things and only 1 good thing then that should tell you something and iv'e only read 5 chapters