This one is really rough. I was excited when the re write was announced but this just fees like the Same story with a few tweaks. The main issues with the initial story was a lack of character devlopment and a messy plot. The premise of the story is just frankly not great. The mc being a reincarnater makes character devlopment much harder and the whole time dilation thing is just boring. The mc should have been killed or tossed out when he was born. just picture this, the mc is killed is an infant and is then sent to the underworld to be judged and seeing his lineage hades desides to take him in whether that’s for revenge against Zeus or something else. The story would work much better in terms of character devlopment as well. A big part of the original was wonder women coming to terms with the fact that her mother locked up her brother for thousands of years. Now imagine her reaction when she finds out that her mother murdered her infant little brother. You can even make a plot point where her mother seals Diana’s memories of him and that blowing up later. TLDR: Boring with a metric ton of potential.
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LIKEI did yes. I respect your commitment to this novel but my original points still stand. As of right now this novel is just not for me will come back later and check on it like I used to do for the original. I wish you the best of luck man.
JokerHighJack:Did you just not read the synopsis