Review Detail of CapaxInfiniti in Vampire's Slice Of Life

If you want quality smut... You're in the wrong place as this story is lacking. If you want quality story... once again you are in the wrong place as this story is very lacking. Final Score 1.8/5. More details or complaints below. Writing Quality: The author has a bad habit of using the wrong words or just fails to properly do a good job describing things and falls back on something like. " she's hot" when describing someone. If it was once or twice I could probably just ignore it and let it go but this stuff is repeated way too often. So 2/5 here. Update stability seems solid or decent so I'm throwing 4/5 here Story Development: I don't even know where to begin... the author likes to do a ton of dumb things to force plot to go one way or the other to name just one thing out of.... well the entire story basically. An example is this. For training Lith has to be tortured. Gets flayed and the like. Bones crushed. Later the author makes the MC Lith say " without pain I won't understand joy" or some nonsense. Like I get the idea and may not entirely disagree BUT the real issue is... Torture? What are they training. Pain tolerance? There are less stupid ways to go about this while also ensuring just as good results... and it seems like pain tolerance was almost the entire reason for that. It is so stupid... There is this other vampire related story I read that at least had a reason behind torture beyond just the pain tolerance and it was because in that story a vampire's regenerative abilities increase the more you need to make use of them or some such. I can get behind that kind of reasoning for torture. In this story it feels like the author just likes to throw things in because they are edgy and they think it is cool or something... 1/5 Character Design: I can get on board with incest. I can get on board with isekai. I can get on board with a world full of isekai. What I can't get on board with is when you make characters and say they're this. Oh wait I mean this. No I mean this instead. Wait what were they again? Like seriously... this is so annoying. For example. You make a character that was a Lawyer in their past life. Then for almost no reason they go full Serial Killer mass murderer mode. For "justice" you say. Such weak writing man... 1/5 World Background: There basically isn't any beyond a brief description of the various areas. 1/5