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Trouxa_157
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a lot of potential, it just needed a coherent beginning and better grammar. My tip is for you to rewrite this beautiful work with an emphasis on grammar!

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ah no this dumpster fires is exactly that a dumpster fire beautiful nope. It's a good premise yes.But it is still a fanfiction one based on one of those 100x books don't remember its name

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Ferasight:ah no this dumpster fires is exactly that a dumpster fire beautiful nope. It's a good premise yes.But it is still a fanfiction one based on one of those 100x books don't remember its name
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