So far so good. Your grammar and punctuation got better in chapter 2. I suggest using Grammarly to help you with grammar and punctuation. It's also my first time reading a novel where it's a woman who has been reborn in a new world of magic and gods. Looking forward to more chapters and will change my rating once there's more to read. I've also added the novel to my library. All the best!
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LIKE_Lunar_:thanks for the honest review I'll definitely try and work on my punctuation and grammar in future chapters