Writing quality is perfect, i haven't seen any errors for the firdt 14 chapters that I read. And all of those chapters have much more word count than many fics. Story development is prrfect, at first I thought these would be a generic itachi SI, but the author have a great job at expressing the characters principles, emotions, and views in life that it makes them have more depth to them. Character design is perfect, not much OG but since most inventions is a derivative from the already invented, I'll just give this one a perfect. Updating stability seems a bit shaky, is this dropped? World background is perfect, not much is known but still logicak since it is still early in the plot
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