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Review Detail of Paget in White Alchemist

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Paget
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This is pretty well written. I only noticed a few spelling errors here and there . The characters are interesting and none seem one dimensional. Similar vibes to my vampire system but with better pacing. Looking forward to more!

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White Alchemist

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david_ogiriki
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thanks for the feedback, promise to keep the consistency, and work on the spelling errors đŸ˜