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Jackspeed8
Jackspeed8Lv121yrJackspeed8

A few things to bring up. I stopped reading around chapter 80. I liked the novel but I felt that the shift of the MCs alignment turned me off. In 3 days he goes from a law abiding citizen to someone who will kill to take their stuff/$. He was bullied but it's a bit much in the future to think that he can get away with it when he just got a job working for the police.

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Gravity Mage with Level-Up System

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Aravind_S
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First MC not saint in first place. At first he didn't have magic talent, that's why he was law abiding citizen. Now, everything changed, he has rare magic power. And his desire for power also awakened. Strong can bend rules, MC also understands that so he is finding ways to improve his talent with system.

Jydd
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Author-san the novel is really good and all but i was just turned off or something because as the comment above the character attitude development is just so instant, his care free attitude in which is his signature that bring the story exiting was like wooosh and gone is like 'what, that's it' and giving the mc sooo much hurdle is also stressful, can you give him sometime to grow and booom, like that, i hope author you can concider my suggestion

Aravind_S:First MC not saint in first place. At first he didn't have magic talent, that's why he was law abiding citizen. Now, everything changed, he has rare magic power. And his desire for power also awakened. Strong can bend rules, MC also understands that so he is finding ways to improve his talent with system.
Aravind_S
Aravind_SAuthorAravind_S

Thanks for your suggestion. I will look into it.

Jydd:Author-san the novel is really good and all but i was just turned off or something because as the comment above the character attitude development is just so instant, his care free attitude in which is his signature that bring the story exiting was like wooosh and gone is like 'what, that's it' and giving the mc sooo much hurdle is also stressful, can you give him sometime to grow and booom, like that, i hope author you can concider my suggestion
Celestials_Dragon
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Is this harem?

Aravind_S:Thanks for your suggestion. I will look into it.