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Review Detail of MKWAME in 2760:Evolution

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current chs read - 50 The novel is centered around what once was a Kid Assassin forced into a Military Academy by his uncle. The novel itself is well written but, sadly I don't agree with the way the MC acts. Yes, you could chalk it up to PTSD from being raised as an assassin... But I can't. I see no correlation between his constant and I do mean CONSTANT laziness and lackluster attitude for everything around him. MC complains about not being able to fit into society but snubs the perfect opportunity to fit back in. honestly infuriating. He joins a military academy. The whole sequence so far to me personally whos been in the military is eh... Rank is thrown around but he is "special" and doesn't follow orders or respects rank? in any real world setting he would've been kicked out for insubordination. doesn't matter if he got "recommended" infact him being a callow is more than enough for his actions to warrant expulsion. overall though the author does a great job at making you feel a certain way and I would probably read the rest of the novel but I wouldn't enjoy slogging around until his Character Development arc. Tbh I started to skim read because my brain would say "oh he's just gonna be lazy and somehow fk it up" anyways those are my complaints but it doesn't detract from the actual story as its very well written and overall a good story. thanks for the chapters author!

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2760:Evolution

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Copper_mask
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Thank you for the honest reply. I am grateful for your views, though I agree with some of your points, but it is my intention to make MC evolve into a real MC like other novel, with a clear goal, or motivation to achieve something. But it can't be at once. He has spent his years in laziness, so to rectify that he needs equal setback that can change him. and it would be soon, The Character Development is must, and MC shall be reborn, though not entirely but at least he will strive to move forward in life instead of staying at the same place. Thanks once again for honest review. In the dead ocean of Webnovel reviews, the review like yours are islands of existence. Cheers, stay with me![img=recommend]

mujaki2
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ch 82 I found myself caring less and less about the main character and more about the cute side character girls till I just gave up on him.