The premise of the novel is great, I like it a lot. There are a couple things that need some work, though they aren't major things that affect the book in a negative way, it's just in the earlier chapters. The spelling and grammar needs to be fixed, other than that nothing else really catches my eye. Keep up the good work Author san.
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