Review Detail of Nix101 in Black Maze:A run to escape

I have read 3 chapters but I don´t think I want to read farther than that. It is a good story and I would like to read it if the english would be a bit better. Most of the times it´s really weird. Also it feels like the Author is only telling what is happening to the main character. He isn´t going into detail at all which I think is a bad thing. If the Author is able to improve these things I might consider reading more of it