Review Detail of Mirio_kun in Demonic System In Naruto
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I am curious about few things. Why did you give him such op ability, item? Are you planning to nerf him to continue the story? Are you going to even go past 10 chapters? Most of the fic I read like this gets dropped very fast, if it's not Chinese that is. Why is he smiling in front of Hokage, Even after his parents death? It will look very suspicious. And if the Hokage let the Uchiha clan get massacred why would he save him, instead of killing him? After all you are showing a different third Hokage from canon.
Demonic System In Naruto
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What op ability ? if you're talking about raizels powers then well, raizel can't solo the naruto world, he isn't that strong and im pretty sure end madara and Kaguya can kill him pretty easily. 2. No one knows the hokage took part of the massacre so why would he suspect that a 8 year old does? 3. The hokage isn't that evil, looks like u have been reading too much fanfics, Hiruzen isn't that evil in canon, plus he sees Ryuji as pretty weak and devoted towards the village so theres no need to kill him. Lmk if there are any more questions.
Sharingan is op on it's own with it's evolution path. And giving him extra!? Not to mention mutation on Uchiha bloodline! Are you kidding me! Both Dazo and Orochimaru will do anything to get the new power. And how will he not get caught or already didn't got caught after all Anbu will follow him everywhere. And really if THIS HIRUZEN really wanted loyal Uchihas he would not have killed even the children.
MaliceGod:What op ability ? if you're talking about raizels powers then well, raizel can't solo the naruto world, he isn't that strong and im pretty sure end madara and Kaguya can kill him pretty easily. 2. No one knows the hokage took part of the massacre so why would he suspect that a 8 year old does? 3. The hokage isn't that evil, looks like u have been reading too much fanfics, Hiruzen isn't that evil in canon, plus he sees Ryuji as pretty weak and devoted towards the village so theres no need to kill him. Lmk if there are any more questions.
I understand your point of view but he did not have the power of Raizel only the line of this one ( he is a Noble and he will have the same power as them and he can surpass or equal Razel in regards to the power of Noble ) , so I don't find him Op since he will have to train to reach the level of a nobility or that of Razel and I don't think that the chunni level at the academy is OP (Kakashi had the same level or more at his age MDR đ)
Really now... If you really can see my point then you can answer all the questions i asked.. Ask yourself for a moment. ( No hard feeling. Just...)
Herohero:I understand your point of view but he did not have the power of Raizel only the line of this one ( he is a Noble and he will have the same power as them and he can surpass or equal Razel in regards to the power of Noble ) , so I don't find him Op since he will have to train to reach the level of a nobility or that of Razel and I don't think that the chunni level at the academy is OP (Kakashi had the same level or more at his age MDR đ)image
for the last question I think Hiruzen underestimated her (he thinks it's just a kid blinded by revenge and he believes or he thought that the Mc is not aware of his involvement and that of Danzo at the massacre after all from his point of view he's just a traumatized 8 year old kid like Sasuke at the time.)đ¤
Mirio_kun:Really now... If you really can see my point then you can answer all the questions i asked.. Ask yourself for a moment. ( No hard feeling. Just...)
and to smile at him in front of the Hokage, I think the Hokage has to believe that somehow he doesn't want to show his weakness or suffering to him. some people have a weird way of dealing with the loss of a loved one (in Naruto for example Kakashi has become stricter with himself and others and Sasuke has become an Emo and as a bonus an avenger and Gaara a psychopath.đ¤) . and for the other fanfics that are dead or that are give up I can only tell you to trust the author
Mirio_kun:Really now... If you really can see my point then you can answer all the questions i asked.. Ask yourself for a moment. ( No hard feeling. Just...)
He didn't want loyal Uchihas he wanted all of them gone, but seeing that one survived a weak one at that, he felt pity and let him survive, but if Ryuji showed a hint of distrust to the village Hiruzen would off him, also why tf would i write the cliche mc gets the rinnegan plot? Thats boring go read a different story if u want that.
Mirio_kun:Sharingan is op on it's own with it's evolution path. And giving him extra!? Not to mention mutation on Uchiha bloodline! Are you kidding me! Both Dazo and Orochimaru will do anything to get the new power. And how will he not get caught or already didn't got caught after all Anbu will follow him everywhere. And really if THIS HIRUZEN really wanted loyal Uchihas he would not have killed even the children.
You got the wrong idea. I am saying he can go that path. I am not say he should already have rinnagan.
MaliceGod:He didn't want loyal Uchihas he wanted all of them gone, but seeing that one survived a weak one at that, he felt pity and let him survive, but if Ryuji showed a hint of distrust to the village Hiruzen would off him, also why tf would i write the cliche mc gets the rinnegan plot? Thats boring go read a different story if u want that.
Thats what i meant, there are countless stories where mcs go for the rinniegan, thats boring and cliche so i didn't wanna do oit
Mirio_kun:You got the wrong idea. I am saying he can go that path. I am not say he should already have rinnagan.
MaliceGod:He didn't want loyal Uchihas he wanted all of them gone, but seeing that one survived a weak one at that, he felt pity and let him survive, but if Ryuji showed a hint of distrust to the village Hiruzen would off him, also why tf would i write the cliche mc gets the rinnegan plot? Thats boring go read a different story if u want that.