How can anyone even like this? The main character is a complete loser. Honestly disgusting to read. Had to force myself into reading a chapter. Simp MC
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LIKEYou know it's funny since I did put a warning in synopsis. Not to mention I also announced in the comments and author thoughts that he'll change after 20 chapters or so. It's clear you didn't read past first few chapters before dropping this review. It would've made much more sense had you dropped this book for its bad writing quality or some other thing. Anyway, I don't care since I don't want readers with such low level patience. But here's a piece of advice from an avid reader of fantasy-- If you ever wanna enjoy a good story, you gotta bear with the starting few chapters.
Well, itās almost unbearable to get through the first chapter, though. I understand that he needs character development, but no one is this bad.
Night_Crawler619:You know it's funny since I did put a warning in synopsis. Not to mention I also announced in the comments and author thoughts that he'll change after 20 chapters or so. It's clear you didn't read past first few chapters before dropping this review. It would've made much more sense had you dropped this book for its bad writing quality or some other thing. Anyway, I don't care since I don't want readers with such low level patience. But here's a piece of advice from an avid reader of fantasy-- If you ever wanna enjoy a good story, you gotta bear with the starting few chapters.image
Oh lord, you judged it after 1 chapter! š¤£š¤£ Bro, listen, there are many stories I forced myself to read past the first 3 chapters BEFORE judging them. Anyway, he had his reasons for being that way. I intentionally made him like that so it may make an impact when he'll loose his feelings for her. But I do get what you mean by that, he was a big simp. And if it's not your cup of tea then that's totally fine but don't do this to other books. As an active reader lemme tell you, there are many stories on this app that will get so good and will make you experience so many things if you manage get past the first few chapters. Anyhow, good day.
Kw0z:Well, itās almost unbearable to get through the first chapter, though. I understand that he needs character development, but no one is this bad.
Yeah most of thes people who post hate reviews for many novels or fanfics judge everything on only the first chapter so Suggest to just ignore them
Night_Crawler619:Oh lord, you judged it after 1 chapter! š¤£š¤£ Bro, listen, there are many stories I forced myself to read past the first 3 chapters BEFORE judging them. Anyway, he had his reasons for being that way. I intentionally made him like that so it may make an impact when he'll loose his feelings for her. But I do get what you mean by that, he was a big simp. And if it's not your cup of tea then that's totally fine but don't do this to other books. As an active reader lemme tell you, there are many stories on this app that will get so good and will make you experience so many things if you manage get past the first few chapters. Anyhow, good day.image
Night_Crawler619:You know it's funny since I did put a warning in synopsis. Not to mention I also announced in the comments and author thoughts that he'll change after 20 chapters or so. It's clear you didn't read past first few chapters before dropping this review. It would've made much more sense had you dropped this book for its bad writing quality or some other thing. Anyway, I don't care since I don't want readers with such low level patience. But here's a piece of advice from an avid reader of fantasy-- If you ever wanna enjoy a good story, you gotta bear with the starting few chapters.image
If you the novel instead of focusing only on the author like the loser meat rider you are, youād know that the MCās behavior stays the same way longer than a chapter.
Novelreader12333:Yeah most of thes people who post hate reviews for many novels or fanfics judge everything on only the first chapter so Suggest to just ignore them
Night_Crawler619:Oh lord, you judged it after 1 chapter! š¤£š¤£ Bro, listen, there are many stories I forced myself to read past the first 3 chapters BEFORE judging them. Anyway, he had his reasons for being that way. I intentionally made him like that so it may make an impact when he'll loose his feelings for her. But I do get what you mean by that, he was a big simp. And if it's not your cup of tea then that's totally fine but don't do this to other books. As an active reader lemme tell you, there are many stories on this app that will get so good and will make you experience so many things if you manage get past the first few chapters. Anyhow, good day.image
Your point? Surely you're not saying you want to feel entertained without getting invested in the story, right?
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I didn't want to read it at first because of the "Strong acting weak" tag, which seems to reek of face slaps. But you got me hooked when you said he'll lose his feelings for her.
Night_Crawler619:Oh lord, you judged it after 1 chapter! š¤£š¤£ Bro, listen, there are many stories I forced myself to read past the first 3 chapters BEFORE judging them. Anyway, he had his reasons for being that way. I intentionally made him like that so it may make an impact when he'll loose his feelings for her. But I do get what you mean by that, he was a big simp. And if it's not your cup of tea then that's totally fine but don't do this to other books. As an active reader lemme tell you, there are many stories on this app that will get so good and will make you experience so many things if you manage get past the first few chapters. Anyhow, good day.image