The story is amazing, to be honest I genuinely don’t see any major flaws, of course as a writer, they might occasionally make spelling/grammar mistakes but it doesn’t disrupt the readers flow/immersion. Only thing that bugs me is the updating stability but sometimes it cant be helped, we all have our own things to do. But other then that, I would chalk it up to amazing! 5/5
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