Review Detail of Raul_Romero in One Piece: White Hunter

Do you have any more of these "Good boy" fanfics i want some actual nice mcs and not mcs who just think for themselves and not others

One thing is "good boy" and another is "nice", I am referring to the alignment

I don't remember the hypocritical parts, but they definitely existed at the time I wrote the review, I obviously stopped reading the fic afterwards, and I won't re-read something I don't like, the "nice boy" thing, it's because it's something it only exists in a "utopia" it is something platonic and ideological, human beings have a hard time accepting that reality does not care about their feelings, and there is the other hypocrisy, joining an organization that accepts enslavement?, one that only do they use you as a dog? oh really? any self-respecting person, the only reason they would join and stay is just to take advantage for a while to strengthen you and then escape as quickly as possible, none of this would matter if the person was a non-reincarnated OC, but in a second chance I don't see anyone doing this, at least no one with good self-confidence and good self-esteem,

You literally proved what I said right on my first sentence.🤣🤣 If you actually go outside and broaden your worldview, you'd know that there are good people in the world that try to do their best, not just for themselves and also others around them. I knew that you would bring up the part of the MC being in the Marine and not actually point out things in the story. It just proves that you're too blinded of your bias against the MC. This is like saying you're hypocritical trying to become a police officer when there's too much corruption in it when your goal is to try to help people. You can't call someone hypocritical based on other people's actions in an organization. The fact that you made a review and made it a lower score just because the MC is a good guy speaks volumes of your personality. Plus, if you actually read the story instead of bashing it just because something isn't your preference and not actual fault from the author like bad grammar, then you'd know that something is happening. One more note, it's very hypocritical for you to call someone hypocritical when you, yourself, are one. If you want to know how I came to this conclusion, then read the previous comments.

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First, I had already mentioned that I stopped reading after the review, if you expect me to remember why I said it, then you failed from the beginning, second, the problem with the personality, I would not mention it if the MC were not a reincarnator with future knowledge and knowledge of organizations, I thought this was clear but apparently I have to write it, if the MC was an OC from One Piece's own world, the motivations, morality, perspective and way of acting would be 100% different, it's as simple as putting on in the shoes of the MC, tell me as a reincarnator, with all the meta-knowledge, what would you do? I don't care that he is a good boy if he is an OC of the world itself, as a reincarnator with metaknowledge it is almost impossible, and that is when the author enters and forcibly imposes idealism on reality, I THINK that my review at that moment is because the reality is overwritten with idealism, and idealism is not a read I am passionate about, I simply gave my opinion not a call to action, if you don't like my review it has to be because I said something wrong not because of your own preferences, and they are not my preferences because I already explained that I would not have a problem with a "good boy" MC

have you even read the fanfiction? have you even ever read one piece? tf you mean? smoker in this ff is basically the most free a marine could be, bro is actively going against the wishes of the higher ups of his higher ups' higher ups! wants to save everyone? bro just saves the guys he thinks are nice and kills those that he thinks arent! maybe actually put either a subjektive statement here or do a objektive statement about the story with actual evidence and stop spreading false info mf