Review Detail of jdbeue in Reincarnated With A System In A Cultivation World
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After writing 150 chapters, I am compelled to write a review. The story is evenly paced in my opinion. Although there have been complaints about the MC and how he 'whines' a lot, I just tried to make his situation more realistic. No one would just accept this sudden change in life. But eventually, he understands his situation. And after that, I am sure that you can also see yourself in the shoes of the MC. After 150 chapters, the story finally changes from the first POV to a third POV. I have been especially careful to make sure that the grammar of the story is not bad, and that the structuring and all the important parts have not been compromised. Now, it is up to you. Do you want to read a story, nay, see yourself in it, feel like you are the MC and that you are going on this wild ride? Then hop on board and let us journey to the end of this world and the one that the MC has gone to.
Reincarnated With A System In A Cultivation World
jdbeue
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coming soon, Even RWAS was updating from a stockpile. I will try my best to update, but with so many things happening at once, it keeps getting delayed. Don't worry though, I have not dropped world online. Meanwhile, as you wait, you can always enjoy this book [img=recommend]
Chibi_Zuobai:World Online update UwU
I know you were trying to make the character more realistic, but that's not how people act. Yes, people complain, but not like this man child. What you've ended up doing is making someone that is unrealistically hateful. That may be what you're going for, but personally, I find it impossible to insert myself into a character who can't shut up and listen. He's not flawed; he's the prime candidate for the darwin award. If he were in a predator movie, he'd be one of the first to die. Personally, I wasn't expecting a talented character, but normal people shut up and lsiten when they realize they're displaced in a life threatening situation. The way he alienates the system, a sentient being he has no awareness of its circumstances, but does have knowledge of its relation to a god-like being makes him... well, I don't have words for my opinion on those kinds of people. Even though I didn't get very far, thanks for the short bit of entertainment.
Falsic:I know you were trying to make the character more realistic, but that's not how people act. Yes, people complain, but not like this man child. What you've ended up doing is making someone that is unrealistically hateful. That may be what you're going for, but personally, I find it impossible to insert myself into a character who can't shut up and listen. He's not flawed; he's the prime candidate for the darwin award. If he were in a predator movie, he'd be one of the first to die. Personally, I wasn't expecting a talented character, but normal people shut up and lsiten when they realize they're displaced in a life threatening situation. The way he alienates the system, a sentient being he has no awareness of its circumstances, but does have knowledge of its relation to a god-like being makes him... well, I don't have words for my opinion on those kinds of people. Even though I didn't get very far, thanks for the short bit of entertainment.
if u do like good mc development, try my other book, world online I wrote it much better than this one
Falsic:I know you were trying to make the character more realistic, but that's not how people act. Yes, people complain, but not like this man child. What you've ended up doing is making someone that is unrealistically hateful. That may be what you're going for, but personally, I find it impossible to insert myself into a character who can't shut up and listen. He's not flawed; he's the prime candidate for the darwin award. If he were in a predator movie, he'd be one of the first to die. Personally, I wasn't expecting a talented character, but normal people shut up and lsiten when they realize they're displaced in a life threatening situation. The way he alienates the system, a sentient being he has no awareness of its circumstances, but does have knowledge of its relation to a god-like being makes him... well, I don't have words for my opinion on those kinds of people. Even though I didn't get very far, thanks for the short bit of entertainment.