Review Detail of SnejZ in Lord Of The World: I Become The Lord Of The Desert From The Start

Well, it is a rather good story, at least I think of it as interesting. It has some flaws here and there, but it could still be an enjoyable reading experience... only if the translation would not s**k so much! For gods sake, it is clear, that a machine was used for morst of the translation, fine. Ther eis worse than doing it like that... But at least go over the translation and try to fix obvious mistakes like gender-swapping or changing translations for the same thing (at least I only noticed two instances, where names were switched out from a desribing name to a chinese romantication of it). Over all the translating becomes more and more sloppy with the later chapters and mistakes are continously draged on (nearly a running-gag is, that two ranks of troop-levels are translated the same...) And yes, one can read the english in a fluent way - the sentencens are legal and rightfull english (most of the time) - that is a given, but come on! We are PAYING for these chapters and even then there are Chapters that are doubled or right out missing? Not to mention some ideoms I can not get about "bull nose"s.... It would also not hurt, if the translator would be interested enough to read the story he/she/it translates, so that very heavy mistakes like the translation of the ranks would be noticed and can be corrected - EVEN IF the original did make a mistake there, it could be corrected, as long as it does not change the setting or consequent story. I mean even the readers are continously marking these mistkaes, but nobody corrects them... that is sad for a paid work, but not unusal on webnovel... However, in a novel revolving around romance, and interaction between characters as the main point, I can tollerate it more to be a bit sloppy... Who cares in an action-game if there are a few mistakes in the backround info about the troops or the ressources? They do not matter. In a strategie-game however - and this novel is a strategie-game becoming a novel - that is a no go! It ruins immersion and you stop caring about these infos, even though they apear quite frequently... Not to mention, that because of missing chapters we are missing some character-sheets and skill-descriptions - or at least I assume that, since they are not here at least. If they are already missing in the original_ BAD author, be ashamed and sit in the corner!