This has potential to be one of the better ones within the genre but two things hold it back. 1. The skill thing he gets to be the mc is great in the beginning but seems to be forgotten more and more as the story goes on. 2. And this is the big one, the translation is going from okay, to bad, to really bad. Things like rare upgrading to rare...you read that right. So when he talks about his two groups of rares that are somehow different, it all gets confusing. BUT THEN, the random words that are being dropped in the middle of a sentence. AND EVEN AFTER THAT... The sentence structures just start getting lazier and more MTL. It is just getting worse and worse quality as time drags on, which is shame since this could have been a great one
Carp Blowing Bubbles
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