Review until Chapter 40: Translation quality needs improvement. Using the word BROUGHT to denote an item paid for in this novel was wrong. It should be BOUGHT. CORE for CAR. etc. Too many wrong spellings and pronoun used. Also, mistaking one character’s name for another.🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️ Characters are okay. Typical delusional villainess who thinks the FL’s family is hers. Well, she can have since Yao Tang doesn’t care a bit about it. For once, the FL has a better store card than the ML. Hahaha!!!😈😈😈😈. The FL is like Qin Ran.😉 Plot is okay too. I’m curious about that Taoist Master who made the prediction for Yao Tang. I want to know the full prediction. This is a good read. I need the raws too.😇😇😇
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