Review Detail of armagedon in MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God

I've reached chapter 40, so far it's been meaningless that he returned from the future, he doesn't show any combat skills, his character doesn't look like that of someone who spent 9 years slaving himself inside a game, and everything he's got so far can only be explained by luck, a stupid amount of it. He also seems to forget about his situation at a moments notice, his goal was supposed to be helping his family, but he goes and wastes away his money on prostitutes, I can't help but dislike the character. there's no character development, everything's rushed, there's a bit of world building, but its mostly limited to the history of an ancient race. The grammar is acceptable, at least it's got that, but other than that, it's more mediocre jack of someone accomplishing things with no effort, no growth and no worth.