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It is interesting so far just don’t mess it up like some other fanfics with great potential But I know that you will not Destroy this fanfic How? Because I have the Hacker intuition 🌝
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Knight087
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how to say, the characters don't feel real. the avengers accepted him way to quickly and without a single doubt, and mc is a normal person who has just gotten powers and is dropped in another world few minutes to a start of a war. he acts way to calm for his situation. he also adapted to quickly to his power sets, experience gain or not, it's still too fast. he also showed no reaction whatsoever to the mass destruction he started causing. these and some other things make the story feel kinda fake. it's not bad necessarily, but could be much better is what I am saying.
Knight087:How?
Baldysalino:how to say, the characters don't feel real. the avengers accepted him way to quickly and without a single doubt, and mc is a normal person who has just gotten powers and is dropped in another world few minutes to a start of a war. he acts way to calm for his situation. he also adapted to quickly to his power sets, experience gain or not, it's still too fast. he also showed no reaction whatsoever to the mass destruction he started causing. these and some other things make the story feel kinda fake. it's not bad necessarily, but could be much better is what I am saying.
Knight087:Anyways I will try to improve as much as possible, thanks for the constructive criticism.