Review Detail of KushalManna in My Necromancer Class
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Great story with great plot, but there are just some problems that I would like to point out. First of all, there was no reasonable explanation regarding why he got such a monster class without touching the 'stone' or whatever it was called that provides classes (I forgot what it was called).Secondly, his hatred or lack of trust towards some people is just overblown and unreasonable (in my opinion) such as Anya, the mirror reality group. I don't think it was their fault, and given MC's otherwise rationale mind he should have understood that.Lastly, (this is just a suggestion for the author considering future progression) the MC should not just focus on mana, as there can be people with spatial abilities who can just ignore the skeletons and attack him from behind. As such, a full skeletal Armor would be a good power to have, or maybe he hones his close- range fighting.That's all,
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while there wasn't a specific explanation on his class, it does have a lot of connections with him. familiar with corpses (butcher), alone and yet surrounded (seen in necromancy as you are surrounded by your undead but not much conversationists) (also seen as how he has been isolated socially but he still talked to people cause of the store). this last point only feeds into his distrust since now he has a class that pretty much every one his enemy.and for your point on spatial mages and he is weak physically, i agree on your point however you have to consider his overall lack of knowledge on worldly abilities, also he is still a human and it is rather nice to see a MC with flaws, especially where he slowly works with them, no omnipotent MC
I wasn't talking about why he got the necromancer class but why he got a class at all without going to the guild and touching whatever altar he was meant to touch.
Shadesworn:while there wasn't a specific explanation on his class, it does have a lot of connections with him. familiar with corpses (butcher), alone and yet surrounded (seen in necromancy as you are surrounded by your undead but not much conversationists) (also seen as how he has been isolated socially but he still talked to people cause of the store). this last point only feeds into his distrust since now he has a class that pretty much every one his enemy.and for your point on spatial mages and he is weak physically, i agree on your point however you have to consider his overall lack of knowledge on worldly abilities, also he is still a human and it is rather nice to see a MC with flaws, especially where he slowly works with them, no omnipotent MC