Last chapter is not sitting well with the storyline because in the story Matthew and Serenity never seemed to be in a romantic relationship... their love seems platonic for me as a reader so the last chapter kinda ruined the storyline... also there was never any proper explanation given to serenity about the Rose tattoo.. it would have made a good plot in the end..everything was nice but the ending chapters are a bit hurried and disconnecting they don't have a flow in the storyline...
Naomi Jordan
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