This novel is a masterpiece. It is only novel here that is on par with a published novel. The few flaws with Free Fall are not present in Shadow Slave, although Free Fall reminded me of a published novel moreso than SS Truly, you have made a work of art, Guilty. The writing quality is superb; fights are masterfully written, with no trouble understanding what is happening. I can effortlessly picture the world that Sunny lives in. Two chapters a day, with next to no grammatical or story-related errors is absurd. The characters are incredible. Every one of them feels like a real person. Sunny clearly has an issue with understanding his own strength, and with how well it is written it legitimately seems intended. Usually, i have a hard time telling whether the flaws in a character are deliberate or side-effects of sloppy writing. Nephis takes on the personality of a stereotypical and relatively bland MC, while Sunny feels like a real person. I enjoy the presence of every character, even the “bad” or “annoying” ones. The story and world building are simply incredible. I don’t know what else to say. I cannot praise them enough.
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