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I cant read past chapter 350 because it ruined the whole story for me so spoiler. Cassie should have had no way to know his true name as her prediction so far is only been into the future, and it can be safely said that there is no future where he reveals his true name as he can now perfectly hide it with his mask, so she shouldn't have been able to know it in any way because she only prophesized Neph's death and that doesn't explain how she knew his true name, her prophesizing ability is dumb if she can just know anything she wants even when it has nothing to do with past or future, its so dumb that its no different from her being able to see someone's darkest thought that they have never and will never reveal, that's how comparably stupid it is. I also promised myself that if he ever becomes a slave with no way to resist in any fucking way then I quit. Because taking away the freedom of will makes for a boring character and story, there's a difference between a slave capable of revolting and disobeying and a slave incapable of resisting in any way. There was also the fact that he basically has two flaws, the system should have recognized that he already possesses a flaw and basically canceled it or just made that one instead. and finally, why even write it so that he becomes Nephs slave instead of just finding another way to write that confrontation, for example Caster reaches the top, as he should have been far ahead of Sunny to begin with, but he catches up while he was too focused on talking to Neph explaining himself like a dumb villains do, then Sunny comes and they defeat him and leave him bleeding to death and barely make it out as he dies. now I struggle to continue this story that was otherwise mostly decent. honestly unless you tell me that he breaks this dumb binding in the next few chapters then I ain't reading this crap. Because as it is now, Sunny is just Nephs bitch, and nobody wants to read a story where the main character is like that.

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it becomes worse...