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The story is really interesting. Good worldbuilding, at least for the "other" world. And interesting, clever MC. He is getting more and more power tho, and we're at volume 2 right now, so the OP-ness is really starting to show. He has some significant disadvantages too, so it's somewhat balanced. I really liked the first volume. However, the second volume started really slow, with a ton of flashbacks, and time skips. The story speed, and tempo dropped significantly, and now I have buyers remorse for paying for the chapters in the second volume. It feels like filler, to increase word count.

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Sorry you feel this way. Second volume is indeed structured differently. It will be very action-heavy in the second part, but there's a lot of things I have to set up to make that happen and make the resolution of the whole Forgotten Shore arc satisfying.