Review Detail of Mahmod_Ana in Parallel Memory

I like this novel a lot but the writing is so horrible thiers so much useless chapter and dialogue that serve nothing at all like the main character sister and her interesting in Zero this one was the worst because it never pay off zero could meet her and save her when he appeared leather but she wasn’t there at all she just finishe they even make the main character and his team beyond stupid in this chapter , like running using Mana then unleashing all of what left at start of the fight so zero could shine, they will never do that it’s impossible not a kid will do what you froce them to do Mr.author, Not only that you cloud solve zero issue when he was seduceing the goddess you cloud say he had change in personality dud to him using dangers skill at forst ark or because he his personality disorder ect, that will solve has problems with her and allow him to get near the main character but you didn’t it’s easy issue with simple souliton why you make it look like an impossible tesk ? 400 chapters 40% of them were irrelevant to the story and served nothing but wast of time even the other 60% chapter had some useless And unnecessary dialogue i hope it will get better but deep down i know that you will continue in the some rythm unfortunately...