Review Detail of Donald_Duck_7210 in In Oregairu as Makabe Masamune

This is a surprisingly good story. It comes off as somewhat masturbatory and a self-insert fic at times but is ultimately a solid piece of work. The grammar is excellent (for a Webnovel story) and the general prose flows somewhat smoothly. The Xianxia influence is prominent (no surprise there, this is Webnovel after all) but it does not detract too much from the story. All in all, the work is top tier when it comes to Oregairu fanfics on WN. Granted that has more to do with the the lack of fics rather than the quality of the writing itself. Regardless, you should be proud of yourself for writing this fic. Hope we get to see more updates!