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Atomsphere
AtomsphereLv11yrAtomsphere

Ptui! This author's style is all about selling his integrity for immediate cheap thrills. Everything is retconned as soon as possible, even his body shape. It even happens from paragraph to paragraph; he'll clearly use a technique to boost his damage and then the next sentence he'll say "he didn't even use a technique!" Tangentially related, the name of the novel is Permanent Martial Arts, but the MC avoids martial arts like the plague. It's all just punching as hard as he can with no respect for martial arts. Only with the most dismissive and cynical eye could someone say that martial arts is only about punching hard. There's even some exposition about how martial arts is more than just hitting hard and then he continues to just do that. World background is pretty cool, it'd probably be like a 4 if it wasn't inconsistent. Superman exists as a fictional character. There are westerners and Asians despite it not being Earth. Technology is all over the place; it's just advanced until it's not for impact reasons. Character design is okay. I like the romance because it's so muted and feels kind of real. It's very reasonable for young people to not even know why they like each other. Specifically, it's nice to see other people have relationships. I actually don't mind harem novels, but my problem with them is usually only the MC can get all the best girls. It's great to see an MC with friends and that those friends have their own lives. Translation quality isn't bad. It's very readable with only some minor issues. Despite all of it's problems, I'm still reading >.>

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Atomsphere
AtomsphereLv1Atomsphere

Reading back over my review, I realize how far my bar has fallen. Lol, the tragic life of a webnovel reader.

Averageman
AveragemanLv11Averageman

So is the novel good or bad

Atomsphere:Reading back over my review, I realize how far my bar has fallen. Lol, the tragic life of a webnovel reader.
Atomsphere
AtomsphereLv1Atomsphere

It's not to my taste. Since saying more will have to include spoilers, I'll just leave it there.

Averageman:So is the novel good or bad