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Review Detail of Ashton_A in Permanent Martial Arts

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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv112yrAshton_A

Ok so mc is weak and finds metal ball which fuses with him, he instinctually knows how to use it, ok. Makes some sense if you think magic. Then mc gets a gene from food rather than killing an animal, unique. I like. That was chapter 1, from there it goes downhill rapidly. We are introduced to our first trope in chapter 2 or 3 in which we learn that the loser mc is friends with the martial school goddess, at this point every comment i read is people complaining or saying they drop because im leaving out some other reasons this is one star. Anyways, loser mc friends with goddess at start trope, check. Heres where the author makes a bigger mistake, 2 is not better than 1 if people hate 1, especially when the second goddess you add instantly after is the mcs little sister and the guys at the school are jealous of your "luck" with women when ONE OF THEM IS YOUR SISTER!!! Not even stepsister, and i know that wouldnt justify things but a lot of these authors try to justify with that excuse. Also mc stupid and him fighting Du Quan was clear plot force and will lead to cockroach young master being born just cause mc was stupid and chose to fight him when he had no need to, only a made up benefit which even the mc said that he coulda learned at any moment (the wolf technique). I hope this stops some from reading, this is just as bad as legend of the mythological gene and is just chasing after the old fame of it before it got nationalistic.

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Permanent Martial Arts

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Spabsta
SpabstaLv14Spabsta

I aint reading allat

Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv11Ashton_A

the bad grammar in this review

Speedwagon7
Speedwagon7Lv14Speedwagon7

Thanks for the review