Writing Quality: It's not too bad. Story Development: Filled with tropes that don't make sense, was literally mentioned a chapter ago that their family was rich and was basically the Kingpin of the area so why wouldn't they have bodyguards? I get the MC, he's feeling restless since his "body" is telling him to fight but I don't get why people would act that way towards him when they know for a fact that his days are numbered. Character Design: Aside from the MC, everyone is cut-outs. Updating Stability: Can't even rate that since this is on trial read. World Background: Won't rate it since it's only started
Shadow On The Moon
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