I admire this author a lot. His word count for each chapter is especially admirable. As someone whos been familiar with silk and the spider verse in general for years silk was honestly so surprising to see on here. The author did well to not only give background but to do research in order to fill out those little details. Instead of saying “She was carrying a college level text book. Probably related to engineering and physics.” he said something along the lines of “She was carrying a book on muons in an anti electron field.” Or something of the sort my memory is not to good. However that little detail really helped guve imagery. The authors reasearch into trauma response is honestly what puts him a cut above everyone on this site. They stated they wanted us to care about the MC from the start and I think that’s largely neglected on this site. An OP MC does not call for half assing your work and yhats what most people tend to do on this site.
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