There is a place to grow, the novel needs to be more mysterious rather than being straightforward which kinda makes it to be predictable. But overall i liked the creative use of words and the picture that was creative and witn that i can give this novel a 4/5
OtakuKnight2079
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LIKEThanls for the review bro. Well the point of self inserts is to be living out their fantasies. I want to flesh out the fact that the MC is invincible from the get go. I want the MC to be able to solve any problem without deus ex machina but he tries to solve them by the hard method to get a semblance of excitement in his new life