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Review Detail of Meowerz in Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

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The POV is actually fine, yes it's weird if you're unfamiliar with it but you get used to it as you read on. For the capitalization, it's easy to ignore and well, would you rather have this than horrendous grammar. For the OPness of the main character, I'm fine with it. I actually quite like the sense of slice of life that this provides rather than the 'grind' for more abilities. Although I would like more interactions with the other characters such as her parents or her siblings.

Apollyon Game of Thrones Fanfiction [Written in Second Person]

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Thanks a lot, Meowerz. :D