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Review Detail of Ugachaka in Life in Vain: Jobless Reincarnation (Mushoku Tensei)

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The start is great, interesting characterization, plot slowly deviating from canon and etc. But by chapter 70 or so the story gets weird, as if the author writes about what is in his head and not what he wrote. Like, Paul fucked up two times and even then, the first time wasn't a 100% fuck up of his since he didn't actually do anything and it was prevented before any harm was done but everyone started pretending like fucks up ALL the time and the author JUST.KEEPS.HAMMERING at the reader with it, in 7 years, two fuck ups, that's it, sure major fuck ups but that's not exactly what I would call a pattern... Contrived drama and characters constantly going off the deep edge in really cringy ways, feels like I am reading soap opera. Relatively minor but a good example of why I felt that the story was becoming really schizophrenic is Rudeus fighting with Sauros cause Sauros attacked him out of the blue and during the fight Rudeus starts ranting how Sauros "is a tyrant who doesn't understand the plight of the common people" the hell?! What insane logic led him from Sauros throwing a punch at a kid to him being "tyrant who doesn't understand the plight of the common people". Don't get me started on "bringing Sylphie to meet Eris cause she is my best friend and they need to meet" what the hell kind of inane logic is that? Either the author stops making Rudy as dense as the average harem protag and admit that Sylphie is in love with him and then that would make some kind of sense or this is just deranged logic, who the bloody hell brings their childhood friend who has totally only platonic feelings for him for the first meeting with the fiance, in what clown world would that make sense?! The fact that there was a lot of drama around Sylphie and the Mc being unable to marry anymore even though Paul SPECIFICALLY asked if the arranged marriage would block him from marrying anyone else and was TOLD that THERE IS NO ISSUE. The crazy turn about with Rudy, there was little sign of his "temper" and suddenly EVERYONE keeps on ranting how volatile he is and he starts talking like a blood thirsty psychopath.

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Life in Vain: Jobless Reincarnation (Mushoku Tensei)

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