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Review Detail of Knight087 in I'm Otsutsuki Toneri

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Knight087
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First of all the writing quality as well as the update stability is quite good. This is a rare novel as not much fanfis are made on "Solo Levelling". Author has done a good work writing this fanfiction. The problem is that there are just too many problems with the mc. Mc has the power of Toneri and is made quite powerful by the author. But the author forgot to insert a brain in his head. He has a hateful personality and tries to suck up with everyone. Sometimes he is nerfed quite a lot by the author. And many a times situations are forced like when Beru is killed. Though killing Beru didn't matter much, but the way he was killed was quite forced. Though this a review just after 14 chapters, I hope the author will try to develop the personality of the author and decide his power level as well. At least make him strong or weak but don't keep changing his power level frequently. That's all.

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Yuvraj_Rathi
Yuvraj_RathiLv4Yuvraj_Rathi

i agree with you bro he has power but no brains

kawaiiinow
kawaiiinowLv10kawaiiinow

exactlymy thoughts on the fanfic! Like it's okay but something always seemed off the inconsistent power level is my biggest concern Mc really has the power of Toneri Otsutsuki yet he's having a hard time with hunters? Never got that

Dethpool_Mlg
Dethpool_MlgLv4Dethpool_Mlg

spoiler alert he never did