Review Detail of Magn0lia in I'm Otsutsuki Toneri

I'm just gonna start off by saying that I am amazed that this has so many power stones. I feel like it's many because it's new fanfic. Anyway, first, the Writing Quality is decent at most, nothing amazing compared to other fanfics of the same genre, so I don't have a lot to say about it. The stability of Updates is good, they inform us if there won't be a chapter in the future, and the updates seem normal. Story Development is bad, just bad. I mean it feels like MC just replaces Sung JIn-woo in every situation where he interferes, except MC does everything worse. Spoiler: #####He somehow managed to get Beru killed, no shadow Beru, no Puppet Beru. He just died. And If this changes in the future, I won't change my review because that idea was stupid. I'm not even gonna mention how the author makes MC hold back in every situation. Character Design is equally as bad as the Story Development, I mean I don't know about the MC or his OCs. They appear out of nowhere and basically hold no significant expect for some nonsense dialogue. World Background is even worse, we don't know about it. I get that it's a fanfic, but that doesn't mean you just name things without explaining. I mean nothing is expended on. It's just MC is at the bridge, MC is a gym, okay a week later, now MC is at Jeju Island or whatever. Anyway, my bad about the horrible grammar issues, it's just that I could give less than a flying fish about grammar right now. This is my honest review, now let's see if it gets deleted. Bye.