Review Detail of POW in Falling Cosmos

I'm happy with my work! It's very good! If you disagree, you're just wrong! (for legal reasons this is a joke) But anyway, if you have criticisms and things you think that are better changed, this is the prime time to voice it! The novel's short enough so I can actually fix stuff easily! (but please don't think I'll do anything you ask of me!) When the novel becomes too long, I'll never change anything ever so don't lose your chance!