Review Detail of Demiurge_Ohara in Arrogant Young Master's Chat Group

objectively Your English sucks, I even got loss in confusion and had to re-read several chapters just to understand the sentences and grammar. Grammarly should fix that, it's a mobile app. now, that's not to say the ploy sucks, I find the difference of the mc and I's perspective intriguing and engaging. the updates is fine, and the quality is good compared to the other xian xia, sure it's predictable but it's still entertaining . the only hindrance is your writing .